potential!
youve got some amazing animating skills however i didnt understand the animation
potential!
youve got some amazing animating skills however i didnt understand the animation
haha
albert looks like they like our animation... OUR animation :P jk i barely did anything but they love it.
really funny and awsome
funny and very well animated
well done
great diolog but lame car animation... atill great tho
this is....
horrible to b honest. altho i kinda like the scene where micky is behind pluto becuz it shows perspective but do better blood effects...
Im starting in Flash
uhhhh
well i like the character ver madnessy but its way to short and if u have 1 stab with blood then the other must have blood too. when the sword goes thru his head add blood
Yea, i know, i did add blood to it, but it looks like it glitched out sadly.
AWSOME!
I dont see how this is flash but its hullarious! NICE!
nice...
I have no idea what it is about so the storyline sucks... The animation is really good though, and although a little bit short it can really get you somewhere in the near future. I also loved the particle effects of the skidding. I just think at the end you shudnt of had the ring not moving. I wud of made it move a little.
once again THIS ISN'T MEANT TO HAVE A STORYLINE.
as for the target I set it to auto rotation and eased it, and i didn't feel like going back to fix it since it was the end of the day
thank you for the review
Audio is worth a hell ofalot!
Animation:
Not much moving at all but I LOVE your cartoon art! ROCK ON! I better see more from you! 85/100
Point:
Its not original so this doesnt really matter much N/A
Audio: AAAAAHHRGGGG!!! if someone makes some piese of shit choppy ass fucking animation, i could care less BUT your cartoon characters are just too good to be muted. I guess sound bubbles are ok AS LONG AS you have some sorta sound like music. Next time you need to choose one. music or voice over!0/100
Thanks for the review, all good points. I would love to make a longer, more animated flash for this, just wrapping up my semester though (so many oil paintings need attention) I'm still learning what NG users expect (it can be a little overwhelming) so you can understand how an in depth review goes a long way for me.
Thanks again! :)
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i agree with plasticmanicor. music wasnt bad. the animation was awful. the motion was bad. most of all you need a back round! im trying to be constructive here: it doesnt even have to be a detailed background, just make one! its much better then white! to be honest the bg doesnt even have to be an actual place. hell, you can just use a bunch of colors that look good! as i sed, its better then white. all of us fellow animators know that a white bg means you put absoutely 0 effort into it. so atleast make us think you tried with the bg.
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