this is....
horrible to b honest. altho i kinda like the scene where micky is behind pluto becuz it shows perspective but do better blood effects...
this is....
horrible to b honest. altho i kinda like the scene where micky is behind pluto becuz it shows perspective but do better blood effects...
Im starting in Flash
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well i like the character ver madnessy but its way to short and if u have 1 stab with blood then the other must have blood too. when the sword goes thru his head add blood
Yea, i know, i did add blood to it, but it looks like it glitched out sadly.
nice...
I have no idea what it is about so the storyline sucks... The animation is really good though, and although a little bit short it can really get you somewhere in the near future. I also loved the particle effects of the skidding. I just think at the end you shudnt of had the ring not moving. I wud of made it move a little.
once again THIS ISN'T MEANT TO HAVE A STORYLINE.
as for the target I set it to auto rotation and eased it, and i didn't feel like going back to fix it since it was the end of the day
thank you for the review
Audio is worth a hell ofalot!
Animation:
Not much moving at all but I LOVE your cartoon art! ROCK ON! I better see more from you! 85/100
Point:
Its not original so this doesnt really matter much N/A
Audio: AAAAAHHRGGGG!!! if someone makes some piese of shit choppy ass fucking animation, i could care less BUT your cartoon characters are just too good to be muted. I guess sound bubbles are ok AS LONG AS you have some sorta sound like music. Next time you need to choose one. music or voice over!0/100
Thanks for the review, all good points. I would love to make a longer, more animated flash for this, just wrapping up my semester though (so many oil paintings need attention) I'm still learning what NG users expect (it can be a little overwhelming) so you can understand how an in depth review goes a long way for me.
Thanks again! :)
Desent Humor. All Around Good.
i like the diolog in it. when the characters talk, it gives a sence realism. Realism like when the caracters blurt things out in an unorganized fashion. i find that technique much funnier then when they take turns talking. so nice job!!
Why thanks.
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